NaPoWriMo: Day 27. A teensy experiment


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NaPoWriMo is a great time to play around with form and content; to try new things; to make mistakes in a (relatively) safe environment.

This idea came to me while I was having a bath. I am the Marat of the poetry world!

It is a play around with words, but intended to contain meaning in each line. This is an idea I may revisit and refine, in the future.

PARSING COMMENT

I

I am

I am not

I am not important

I am not important enough

I am not important enough to

I am not important enough to want

I am not important enough to want to

I am not important enough to want to do

I am not important enough to want to do anything

I am not important enough to want to do anything more

I vanish quietly expecting nothing more affirming now

I vanish quietly expecting nothing more affirming

I vanish quietly expecting nothing more

I vanish quietly expecting nothing

I vanish quietly expecting

I vanish quietly

I vanish

I

 

 

 

 

 

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